It was a really good story though I think it could have been better told. The shifts in narrative caused me quite a bit of confusion. It was hard to decipher who was speaking or writing after each break. I finally came to understand that any break, including new chapters, meant to be on the lookout for who might be speaking throughout this next piece to the story. The editing in places seemed to be missing; I think a more thorough editor could have helped to solve some of the sudden narrative... (show more)

It was a really good story though I think it could have been better told. The shifts in narrative caused me quite a bit of confusion. It was hard to decipher who was speaking or writing after each break. I finally came to understand that any break, including new chapters, meant to be on the lookout for who might be speaking throughout this next piece to the story. The editing in places seemed to be missing; I think a more thorough editor could have helped to solve some of the sudden narrative jumps that became issues for me as the reader. Thankfully, the end did not dissapoint. Overall, it was a hard book to get in to so I couldn't get lost in it like I'd hoped to. I'm glad I stuck it out and finished it but wouldn't recommend it to friends...especially since there are so many other and more engrossing vampire stories out there. (show less)